Vince Responded to Group 1 (Narrative Learning) and Group 2 (Spiritual Learning)
Discovery Expedition Program Design: Dearborn Michigan
Discovery Expedition Program Design: Dearborn Michigan
Both spent time brainstorming about the program
design and target learning group.
Troy wrote the Intro.
Vince wrote the Rationale and Action Plan.
Troy Rector
&
Vincent L. Stults
Ball State University
October 26, 2014
EDAC 634
Introduction
Transformational learning can occur through a variety of methods
and learning experiences. Different avenues can be used in order to facilitate
and enable the cycle of learning.
Cultural immersion is one way that learners can undergo an experience,
reflect critically, rationally process what they’ve learned and how it’s affected
them, and devise a course of action based on the transformation.
For years, The State University of New York has offered
cultural immersion through its city community colleges. Tompkins Courtland
Community College is one the two year schools that offers this immersion as
part of a service learning project. Students travel to Nicaragua and are
immersed with the cultural and learn through a transformative process. “The
goal of this service learning course is to provide students with a full
cultural immersion in history, culture, and healthcare in a developing
country. Through participation in actual healthcare clinics, students will be
exposed to the disparities and the functioning of a third world healthcare
system” (“TC3 Catalog: Program Areas:
Study Abroad: Nicaragua,” n.d.). For most
students, it is the first time being exposed to a foreign culture as well as austere
conditions in which that countries healthcare system operates. This factors
greatly into the transformational process for the learners due to pre-set
concepts and ideas that they’ve had prior to the trip.
According to Richard Kiely,
learners experience transformatively when they experience personal, structural,
historical, and programmatic factors which directly contrast with the student’s
prior ideas and concepts (Kiely, 2005). Kiely studied the Nicaraguan service learning
and cultural immersion program as part of his overall research on transformational
learning theory. Other programs can use the Nicaragua trip as a model for the
transformative learning process.
Learners
The learners of our program
consist of professionals who wish to be more effective by understanding the
uniqueness and differences from an Arabic and Muslim community to a typical
American community. By understanding certain factors, the professionals can
better serve those Arabic communities in business, education, or other avenues
of professional interaction. The learners of this program are then better equipped
with the mindset and attributes needed to facilitate professional relationships
without risk of offending or impeding cultural norms and practices in similar communities.
Our program specifically
targets adult learners at Ivy Tech Community College. Adult leaders taking
classes for professional development and career enhancement would benefit greatly
from this program. Ivy Tech currently has programs that focus on individuals
working with the corporate world called Corporate College and The Center for
Lifelong Learning. Our program would be a great asset to those students and
professionals participating and learning in those programs.
Our program objectives are
two fold. First is to offer a cultural immersion opportunity to learners that
they may not have previously had the chance to participate. This is in line
with the professional development and future goals of our students. By
participating in the norms and practices of an Arabic community, they will be
able to observe, interact, and immerse themselves fully. As part of this, any pre-set ideas, concepts,
and stereotypes can be disposed of.
This is critical to the overall transformation of the learners. Second
objective is to create an learning environment in which our learners think
critically for themselves and and analyze their own experiences and ideas. By
going beyond the classroom, our program provides an opportunity in which the
students are empowered to think on their own. This responsibility of discovery
and reflection requires the learner to think critically about themselves,
their experience, and how they have been effected. Again, this is critical to
the transformation of our learners and their gain in their professional
knowledge and attributes.
Purpose
The purpose of our project design is to assist participants in a learning journey, in which they seek out an answer to their own learning quest, about themselves, their social context, or society, through facilitating learning opportunities in a cross-cultural context (the Arab community of Dearborn Michigan) with the goal of seeing students become better equipped to be leaders in a global society.Objectives of the program
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"Islamic Center of America" by Dane Hillard |
Rationale
The main ideas of our program design are rooted in
the core purpose of transformational learning, by leading learners
towards a focus in learning that is not merely informational, but that
appreciably changes what they know, moving learners through the cycle of "experience,
critical reflection, rational discourse, and action" (Merriam et al 2007,
p 134).

In finalizing the focus of our own program design,
we realized that 1) our implications from the previous work needed a clearer
development for application than what we had outlined; and 2) our project
needed a more narrow target learning group than initially planned; and 3) that
we should focus on a different learning experience than what was reviewed as
well as what we had originally considered.
Therefore, we decided to utilize a modified and more narrow band of the
implications we gathered from these sources for our own project. Our initial
implications from the literature review program reviews can be seen at the end
of their respective posts on our blog (http://aceinsights.blogspot.com/).
Nevertheless, we saw some implications to implement
from what we learned from these reviews. Kiely's work (2005), for instance,
helped us in other unforeseen ways, aiding us in recognizing our own target
group more easily, and informing us more clearly of what transformational
theory looked like in the practice of program design.
Also, we recognized the need to add elements that
were not explicitly highlighted in our literature review, nor in the program design
(although in retrospect, we recognized that they were clearly revealed in the research
we reviewed). As these elements are reviewed by others extensively in the
literature and in other programs, we have chosen to add them here to maximize
the effectiveness of our final program design and to cite the appropriate
external references as needed. See Table 1 for our revised list of implications
and our recent additions. These added components are the use of a modified form
of Brookfield's questions for learning journals (1995), as well as Apte's insights
and questions for transformative learning facilitators (2009). Additionally, we
have added in the use of a mini-ethnography to add depth and insight into
cultural understanding as grist for the transformational cycle. Seen in such
work as that conducted by Sortin (1999), for her class of interpersonal
communication students, and for Weinstein & Ventres'
work with medical students to help them to become more deeply connected to
their cultural frame (2000).
Methodologically we greatly appreciated the
connection of supporters, and the guiding question of the Mycelium School from
our project review (“Mycelium – Are You A Journeyer?” n.d.). While we also added essential novel practices
of our own into the design.
Also, from our review of the Mycelium School (“Mycelium
– Are You A Journeyer?” n.d.), we choose to focus on the concept of the learning
journey, which has been a metaphor of many transformational based programs, moving
our learners from familiar
territory into an unfamiliar cultural setting with the intent of creating a set
of "problematic frames of reference" (Mezirow,
2003) for the learners that serve to facilitate the transformational cycle of
learning "experience, critical reflection, rational
discourse, and action" (Merriam et al 2007, p 134). Mezirow calls this kick off process a "disorienting
dilemma" (Mezirow, 1991). Recognizing
as Apte (2009) has communicated, that these transformative phases are seldom a
sequential process, and are often cyclical and recurring, we have chosen to
incorporate practices that initiate the key elements of this model with less
concern about progressing through each of them in order, but instead rooting
our design in the component functions identified by Apte for the facilitator:
1. Confirming and interpreting current frames of reference
2. Working with triggers for transformative learning
3. Acknowledging a time of retreat or dormancy
4. Developing the new perspective ( 2009, p. 172).
1. Confirming and interpreting current frames of reference
2. Working with triggers for transformative learning
3. Acknowledging a time of retreat or dormancy
4. Developing the new perspective ( 2009, p. 172).

Action Plans
Over the course of the Dearborn Discovery Expedition
(from the pre-trip meetings and preparation, through the on-location discovery journey,
and post-trip follow-up), as stated in our introduction, we will assist
participants in a learning journey, in which they seek out an answer to their
own learning quest, about themselves, their social context, or society, through
facilitating learning opportunities in a cross-cultural context
(the Arab community of Dearborn Michigan) with the goal of seeing students become
better equipped to be leaders in a global society.
Group and individual activities are designed to give shared,
as well as unique, experiences in the learning environment. For instance, our
design includes intentional separation of Muslim personal encounter experiences
to expose different students to differing view-points among Shia, Sunni, and Sufi
residence. It is expected that this will create differences in perspective on
the community during group reflection and discussion.
Steps
Step 1: Application Process
While this design overview does not lay out the details of
the application process, it is critical that a thorough application process is
followed. Which must outline and receive commitment from the learners
concerning the extensive commitment that learners must adhere to in the
Dearborn Discover Expedition from pre-trip preparation through post-trip
reflection.
Step 2: Pre-Trip Meeting and Preparation

- Cultural Preparation: Pre-Reading Assignments and Discussion.
- Stockton, R., & Tessler, M. (2009). Citizenship and Crisis: Arab Detroit After 9/11. New York: Russell Sage Foundation.
- Excerpts from Ahmed, A. S. (2010). Journey into America: the challenge of Islam. Brookings Institution Press.
- Critical Reflection Preparation: Instruction Time for Journaling, Critical Reflection Exercises based on Brookfield's Learning Journal (1995).
- Team Development: Basic games, icebreakers, and activates to foster team interaction and cooperation for students participating in the learning journey. As well as overview and instruction for students organization of an Advisory Team.
Pre-Trip
meeting I will provide a purview of the whole experience, introduce the
assignments for Cultural Preparation Materials, and start students in their
Critical Reflection activities, and initiate their learning journey quest. Pre-Trip meeting II will facilitate
reflection on the first two weeks Cultural Prep readings and help them prepare
their advisory team, and introduce the mini-ethnography and provide needed
preparatory reading for the activity. Pre-Trip meeting III will again visiting
the cultural preparation process and reflection, follow-up on advisory team
details, and focus extensively on the mini-ethnography assignment including a
virtual pre-field exploration activity utilizing Google Earth and cover last
minute updates and detail about the trip. Team development will be a part of
each meeting encounter.
Step 3: Discovery Expedition
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"Arab American National Museum" |
Step 4: Post-Trip Reflection
Transformational
learning requires several components to maximize the learning experience. As
such, it is expected that learners participate in a post trip follow up, in
which all team members present to the group a report on their own quest in the
learning journey, including an overview of their mini-ethnographic. This time
will be followed by a facilitated discussion reflecting on the totality of the
experience for the group and participants. This time will conclude by leaders
presenting humorous, humorous but affirming certificates of achievement rooted
in what the facilitators observed in the teams learning journey. This exercise
is to be a surprise element in the closing session. This event will include not
only the team of students who participated, but those who form their advisory
teams, as well all volunteers working to support the learning event. This
meeting will be followed by a shared meal.
Procedures
Advisory Team
Students will select 2-3 individuals to support them in their learning process. These people should include people already in their personal network. One should be a professor or faculty in their learning institution. This team will play diverse roles from relational coaches, learning cohorts, and/or individual mentoring. These will become the people most aware of the students personal quest, providing accountability, emotional support, and mentoring/coaching for the students learning process. Students must commit to at least three hours of interaction with the their advisory team members (individual, or as a group), virtually, in person, via letter exchange, email, or other means of interaction.Guiding Question
While it is expected that the learning event of a cross
cultural exchange itself has great transformative potential, by having the
learners ask their own question to explore (adding a self-directed learning
component), it is expected to add to the transformative process, increasing both
the interaction with the learning context, and the focus of the reflection
process in personal and group environments. The question itself will be one
that is of personal significance to the student concerning
themselves, the context of their cultural learning expedition, or about
society. This will be the primary focus of the student in consultation with
their advisory team. The teams purpose is in serving the student in their
selection, engagement, and reflection on their query or quest.
Exploration Opportunities
While the destination is an obvious place of
exploration, both the complete cycle and several mini-cycles within the program
are intentionally designed with the theme of exploration in mind. The entire
process will be supported by self-directed learning opportunities in the framework
of clear structured activities. Social, cultural, and interpersonal
explorations in both physical and virtual arenas will be employed.
Mini-ethnography (Field and File Notes)
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"شارع وورن في ديربورن" |
Journaling/Critical Incidents and Brookfield's Learning Journal
Critical Incident Reports are an excellent way to bring
reflective focus to journal entries of our participants, and according to
Arthur's review (2003), have been used in cross cultural learning settings
effectively for many years. Rooted in the consideration of critical incidents, Brookfield's
questions for learning journals (1995), provide a clear
choice of design for these journal reflections. They have been used extensively
as reflexive tools in classroom settings for learning. By utilizing them during
the preparation phase, for our purposes, a slightly modified form (while onsite
in Dearborn) will provide the ability for students to write journal entries
quickly and effectively for personal reflection and to prepare them for group
reflective activities offering students a powerful tool for their personal
learning quest. (See Table 3 for Brookfield's guidelines)
Group Reflection
Apte's work (2009) outlines several questions for
facilitators to consider in their project design for the arena of "Working
with triggers for transformative learning" such as, "What are the
differences in perspective among these
participants?... What were people surprised by? ...What evoked people’s
anxiety?" We will use these as a foundation for our facilitated group
reflection. It is expected that the students use of Brookfield's questions
(1995) for their journaling will prepare them for this group facilitated
reflection time.
Schedule (This is a generic schedule without specific dates) |
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Week 1
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Saturday 9 am-12 pm
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Pre-Trip Meeting and Preparation I
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Week 3
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Saturday 9 am -12 pm
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Pre-Trip Meeting and Preparation
II
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Week 5
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Saturday 9 am -12 pm
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Pre-Trip Meeting and Preparation
III
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Week 6
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Discovery Expedition
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Day 1 (Thursday)
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6 pm -
6:45-9:15 pm -
9:30-10:30 pm-
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Arrive at hotel and check
in
Students find place to eat
on their own, and complete scavenger hunt assignment
Group Reflection on
Scavenger Hunt
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Day 2 (Friday)
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8-9 am -
9 -9:45 am -
10 am-12 pm -
12-1 pm -
1:15-2: 30 pm -
2:30 -4:00 pm -
4:00-5:30
pm -
6 - 9 pm -
9:30-10:30 pm -
Overnight/
Next Morning -
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Breakfast
Overview of Day and Q
& A
Arabic American Museum (History & Cultural Discovery)
Group Lunch (Destination TBD)
Attend Friday Prayer at
Mosque
Prearranged Dialogue and
discussion with Mosque leaders and Mosque Attendees
Complete Personal Journaling and Reflection Exercise
Arabic Theater/Movie/Dance Event (will vary depending on week
and month of visit)
Group Reflection (Based on Apte, 2009)
Complete Personal Journaling and Reflection Exercise on evening
events
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Day 3 (Saturday)
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8-9 am -
9-9:30 am -
10 am-1 pm-
1:30-5:30 pm -
6 - 7 pm -
7:30 -10pm -
Overnight/Next Morning -
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Breakfast
Day's Activity Review
Yalla Eat - Culinary
Walking Tour
Mini Ethnography - Groups of two or three, will engage in their
Mini Ethnography in pre-selected track for Food (Arab American Museum),
Community Service (ACCESS), or at local Mosque (three large mosque options,
several smaller options)
Group Presentations and Group Reflection
Dinner
Complete Personal Journaling and Reflection Exercise on evening
events
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Week 7
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Day 4 (Sunday)
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8- 9 am 9:15 -
9:45 am -
10 am-1:00 pm-
1:30-4: 00 pm -
4:30 pm -
5:15 pm -
6: 30 pm -
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Breakfast
Group Meeting
Hotel Check Out and Exploration on your Own (good opportunity to
explore additional aspects of your own learning quest, connect with anyone
you would like to talk with further, etc.)
Attend Sufi Meet-up event (there are presently a couple options
- time and event may change as present meet-up events change)
Complete last on-site personal journaling and reflection
exercise
Dinner on your own
Leave
for home
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Week 9
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Saturday 4-7 pm
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Post-Trip Reflection (Meal to Follow)
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References
Arthur, N. (2003). Preparing
International Students for the Re-Entry Transition. Canadian Journal of
Counselling, 37(3), 173–85.
Brookfield, S. D. (1995). Becoming a critically reflective teacher.
San Francisco: Jossey-Bass.
Kiely, R. (2005). Transformative
international service learning. Academic
Exchange Quarterly, 9(1), 275-281.
Merriam, S. B., Caffarella, R.
S., & Baumgartner, L. M. (20007). Learning in adulthood: A comprehensive
guide. John Wiley & Sons.
Mycelium – Are You A
Journeyer? (n.d.-a). Retrieved October 6, 2014, from
http://mycelium.is/are-you-a-journeyer/
Mezirow, J.
(1991). Transformative
dimensions of adult learning. San Francisco: Jossey-Bass
Mezirow, J. (2003).
Transformative learning as discourse. Journal of Transformative Education,
1(1), 58–63.
Sotirin, P. (1999). Bringing
the Outside In: Ethnography in/beyond the Classroom. Retrieved from
http://eric.ed.gov/?id=ED437686
TC3 Catalog: Program Areas:
Study Abroad: Nicaragua. (n.d.). Retrieved October 26, 2014, from http://www.tc3.edu/catalog/ap_sa_nicaragua_hlth_hums.asp
Weinstein, J., & Ventres,
W. (2000). Mini-ethnography: meaningful exploration made easy. FAMILY
MEDICINE-KANSAS CITY-, 32(9), 600–610.
Table
1: Revised Implications from our Previous Reviews
Literature Review/Program Review Implications
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Used
in Our Program Design
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Mycelium Program Review
(Selected Applications)
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The model of the learning journey through self-directed
learning and a supporting community
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Learning Journey - Self Directed
Learning Quest
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Workshops and projects that foster
leadership development and facilitate the transformational process
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Pre-Trip Meeting and Preparation
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Multiple types
of learning facilitators working together to guide, coach, support and
facilitate the transformational process: cohort model, coaches, instructors
and learning facilitators.
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Advisory Team
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New York Community College Program Review (Revised Implications)
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Full cultural immersion and
active participation in the culture foster transformative learning.
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Pre-Reading, Mini-Ethnography, One on
One dialogue with residents, exposure to history, attending local events and visiting
community institutions.
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Learning journals, group reflection and student assignments foster
students personal transformation.
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Learning Journal, group
reflection meetings, and Self-Directed Learning Journey
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New (Revised) Additions
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(Mezirow 1991) and (Merriam,
2007) - The four essential components of transformational learning are: experience,
critical reflection, rational discourse, and action.
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For the underlying cycle of
learning at the core of the program design.
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(Apte, 2009) - Utilization
of her development of four quadrants of transformational learning ensures a
more thoroughly distributed learning experience in the program design and
program facilitation.
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Used for more thorough application
of transformational theory to the design process for Student Learning
Journals, Group Reflection, the Self-Directed learning journey and
interaction with Advisory Team.
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(Brookfield, 1995) -
Critical Incidents and focused learning journal activates provide deep level
critical reflection for students (and teachers).
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Used for Student Learning
Journals, Group Reflection, and Self-Directed learning journey in interaction with Advisory Team.
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(Sortin, 1999) and
(Weinstein & Ventres, 2000) - The mini-ethnography is a useful tool
in facilitating deep level cultural connection as well as in critical
reflection.
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Used in development of the
mini-ethnography for greater cultural immersion of students in the context of
their Discovery Expedition, and as an aid in the self-directed learning
journey, as well as an additional tool for critical self reflection.
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Table
2: Judy Apte's Questions for Reflection
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(Judy Apte's Questions for Reflection (2009, pp. 173-175)
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Confirming and Interrupting Current Frames of Reference
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Working with Triggers for
Transformative Learning
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Questions: focusing on the
participants
What is
regarded as ‘normal’ behaviour (in the participant’s social world)?
What
examples are used to describe ‘good’ and ‘bad’?
What ideas
or stories claimed people’s attention, and what is gripping about them?
What are
people’s expectations of themselves?
• Are any
expectations seen as impossible?
• Are
their expectations coherent with other people’s expectations?
• Are
their expectations contradictory or split?
What
information has the participant never contemplated before?
Have
previous practices become lost along the way?
Questions: focusing on the
facilitator
What
assumptions are embedded in the ideas that I am presenting and/or the materials that I am
using?
Which
assumptions are likely to be compatible with those of the participants?
Which
ideas presented alternative frames of reference?
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Questions: focusing on the
participants
What are
the differences in perspective among these
participants?
What
evoked people’s curiosity?
What were
people surprised by?
What
evoked people’s anxiety?
What
specific dilemmas are they raising?
What hopes
do they express?
Does the
person experience any contradictions between who they want to be and who they
are currently?
Questions: focusing on the
facilitator
What
evoked my curiosity – what am I thinking and wondering about?
What was I
surprised by?
What
evoked my anxiety?
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Developing the New Perspective
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Acknowledging a Time of Retreat or Dormancy
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Questions: focusing on the
participants
What
capabilities are beginning to emerge?
How are
views shifting over time?
What
strategies are people interested in developing further and testing in their
own lives?
How can
the learning in the program be continued?
What reactions
do participants expect from people in their usual environment?
Questions: focusing on the
facilitator
What
aspects of the program are creating a mood of possibility?
How can we
take notice of the results that flow from the new possibilities?
What do I
hope for at this point?
What
barriers do I see in their usual environment?
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Questions: focusing on the
participants
What
indicates that people are having some doubts about the change?
Is there
inertia occurring around some things?
What are
participants avoiding?
What
provokes anger or defensive responses?
What
assumptions are people being ‘pulled back to’?
What
unlearning might be required for them to move forward?
What could
the person ‘lose’ if their current assumptions are not confirmed?
What aspects
of the learning would require significant courage?
Are there
some risks that might occur if people move forward with this?
What do
people say is impossible for them?
Questions: focusing on the
facilitator
What
doubts have come to my mind?
Are there
points at which I experienced anger or defensiveness?
What seems
possible at this point?
What seems
impossible at this point?
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Apte, J. (2009).
Facilitating transformative learning: A framework for practice. Australian
Journal of Adult Learning, 49(1), 169.
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Table
3: Stephen D. Brookfield’s Questions for Student Learning Journals
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Stephen
D. Brookfield’s Questions for Student Learning Journals (1995,
p. 98)
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We will use these
questions unmodified from Weeks 1-5 and 8-9. During the Discovery Expedition,
students will respond to these question according to the scheduled journal
times and the words "this week" will be changed to "in today's
events."
In designing the program, we acknowledge
Brookfield's admonition to give student clear directions when assigning a
learning journal. He asserts that: 1) students need a clear-cut course of action;
2)
they need
to see
that keeping
a journal is in their best interest; and 3) their hard work should be publically recognized
somehow. Brookfield’s guidelines (1995, p. 98) comprise these eleven questions:
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What have I learned this week about myself
as a learner?
What have I learned this week about
my emotional responses to learning?
What were the highest emotional
moments in my
learning activities this week?
What were the lowest emotional
moments in my learning activities this week?
What learning tasks did I respond to most
easily this week?
What learning tasks gave me the
greatest difficulties this week?
What was the most significant thing
that happened
to me as a learner this week?
What learning activity or emotional
response most took me by surprise this week?
Of everything I did this week in my
learning, what would I do differently if I had to do it again?
What do I feel proudest about
regarding my learning activities this week?
What do I feel most dissatisfied with
regarding my learning activities this week?
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Brookfield, S. D. (1995). Becoming a critically reflective teacher.
San Francisco: Jossey-Bass.
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Very nice job and I must say very detailed. I learned a lot about transformation learning. That was pretty cool to have the participants do a learning journey. I believe in this process they can seek their own learning quest.
ReplyDeleteWhere/when can I sign up? Well written and researched. I particularly like the preparation required by students. Understanding of expectations, background, and a concept of how the experience will unfold allows students to enjoy the time without getting so wrapped up in the mechanics. I also appreciate the provision for continual reflection. Such activity is pivotal to deeper learning and is often under utilized.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on an excellent design.
Darcey
I think it’s great that your program is focusing on professionals who want to be more effective by “understanding the uniqueness and differences from an Arabic and Muslim community to a typical American community.” This seems like a great way to incorporate diversity in an educational environment who may be lacking in it. To successfully operate in a cross-cultural environment is being able to understand other practices. I also like how you are utilizing the four quadrants of transformational program facilitation.
ReplyDeleteGood job.
Carol
Vince and Troy,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very comprehensive design paper! I know both of you spent a lot of time on this, and the action plan is rich and detailed. The pictures are beautiful and relevant, and the paper is well organized in your blog! Excellent!
Here are some of my suggestions:
1. Try to be succinct since long description can distract people’s attention from important things and people can easily forget the focus of your paper.
For example, cut off the majority of the descriptions about the problems of your initial review paper and program investigation paper. You can put them in your monthly summary. Use one short paragraph to tell us that: your program is based on the main ideas from literature and the features identified from program investigation; your initial literature review and program investigation did not turn out to be what you expected, so you modified the implications of what you have done, and here are some ideas/methods/strategies you identified from the modified implications and you will integrate them in your design…
2. Throughout this paper, I noticed that talked about how good something is, and how you want to use something in your design, but after I read your description, I don’t really know what it is about and how you can apply it in your design, since you did not address it, and you just refer us to check the tables at the end of the paper, which is cumbersome.
3. You included quite a lot of detailed activities, which is good! But what is the thread which holds all of these activities together? What are the rationales which support these activities and indicate that these activities can lead to learners’ transformation?
4. Put each tables in text, rather than putting them at the end of the paper, which is convenient for your readers.
5. I don’t know how Brookfield’s Questions can relate to transformational learning. You may delete it and only use Judy Apte's Questions for Reflection
6. Be straightforward, use your own words to tell us what you really want to achieve in this paper, and how.
You have too much information in the paper, yet there’s lack of a clear layer which helps us understand the relationship among purpose, objectives, activities and rationales of why you use certain activities. You can use the following table to sort your design.
Purpose Objectives Activities Rationales
7. Try to use your own words or simple language to explain things. For example, in your text, you wrote:
Revealing their need to "bracket" their own perspectives and biases, in order to more accurately engaging in "doing" ethnography (Sortin, 1999).
---- In your own words to explain what it means, since practitioners may not understand it.
Bo
I like that you included the modified table!
ReplyDeleteBo
Troy and Victor, your group did an amazing job. You did a nice with helping learners seek out the learning process to be in a global society. Thank you for sharing about the cross cultural context. The learning journey was great. I wouldn't mind doing it.
ReplyDeleteVincent/Troy - After reviewing and reading your blog, it is apparent you both have mastered this task/assignment. My hat is off to you both, you could be teachers in blogging. It is clear you covered every aspect of transformational learning. Your blog was easy to read and understand. I felt like I was on a journey. Thanks for the expereince. Post by Gigi Brown
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